September 16, 2009

Thanx Proff.

Well, I wanna publicly thank our proff. for giving me the idea of writing the article on this topic.
This was assignment no.2. Here is the feedback given by the viewspaper team:

Article SubmitINFY AND WIPRO DENIED LAND IN W.B.

Hi Neetal

First of all, kudos on the selection of the topic. Your research and understanding reflects through in the article.

There are some grammatical errors that we have corrected, but the most important point that we think you failed to make was that a similar incident happened with the Nano. Hence in this article, the comparison of the three companies becomes imperative. The said land which was sold to these companies was bought from the farmers and changed into SEZ by Change of Land use policy. Now neither the farmers have the land nor are they employed as labourers and the govt. is just sitting on the land bank. In such a case, who is to be held responsible and what can be done to help the plight of the innocent farmers?

In the end you mention Mr. Bhattacharya should intervene, though you dont mention him in the article and do not introduce him. Please make sure that when you refer to somebody, a minister or a common man, pleas egive due introduction.

A Good effort!

Regards




The VP Team