My first Letter

Hi!
Ahem, I am talking of this one:

Hi Neetal,
Welcome to The Viewspaper Internship for writers. As you all may be aware of The Viewspaper is a platform for the youth to express their opinions, voice their ideas and through this medium, make a difference in the mindsets of the world. Almost 2000 students across the 20 cities of India and 5 different nations have been associated for The Viewspaper and expressed their views. We, at The Viewspaper, believe there is a revolution around the corner. We invite you to be a part of it. As part of the Online Internship, you would get a hands-on experience in different styles of writing, editing and research. Writing is a very important tool of expression, it has the ability to conquer barriers and spread messages. In this unique platform, we believe, that the pen is certainly mightier than the sword. In all your tasks, we will be there to assist you and solve your difficulties. We will give you our feedback which will help you grow as a writer and identify your mistakes. We hope this one month proves to be a period of learning for all of you. Youth has the power to symbolize and be the change. Come let's together make a difference.
-- RegardsThe Viewspaper Teamwww.theviewspaper.netThe Voice of The Youth