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Hi Neetal,



Your article was an interesting article to read . There were minor errors such as repetition of words. (The second thing is you should have discussed if it is feasible or is the investment in the project worth it?), so please be careful about those.

Your writing style is good and keeps the reader engrossed in the article. We liked the quote which you have written at the end of the article because it concludes the article really well and makes the reader think about the article even after he has finished reading it.



Good luck!



Regards,



The Viewspaper Team